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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyTue Feb 18, 2014 6:41 pm

All but the first one are Middle Man, Ima let X comment before I move you.

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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyTue Feb 18, 2014 10:36 pm

i loveit, but the move to middle man may be a tad bit early, i like his style and know he can woah me alot more, but keep it up man. ill be waiting for your update

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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyWed Feb 19, 2014 5:16 pm

~Moved

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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyFri Feb 21, 2014 7:15 pm

The first animation I thought was good other than some shakiness however, after his first kick when he takes a small jump, I feel like there should have been an extra frame to not seem so immediate. however, the attacks had good emphasis in them.
For the second animation I couldn't really find any errors either other than the arms when he brought them back to prepare the first kick, in which I saw some shakiness.
The last animation was I believe the best. Good emphasis in the attacks along with reactions and the poses weren't bad either. Overall, I think your close to Middle-man but you just have to tweak some errors. Also welcome to TAL!
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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyFri Feb 21, 2014 11:49 pm

thanks for the cc man, ill be sure to update asa i finish this animation
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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyTue Feb 25, 2014 10:38 am

Indeed you are pretty good, I liked your movements and that effect was well done, but I really enjoyed that last animation,  you should  make longer animations so it would be easier for you to get moved up (Y)
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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyTue Feb 25, 2014 8:43 pm

Love your work man, btw were you Van from DD?
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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 8:58 pm

Kermit, he's not Van.

Your animations are pretty good Dass. It's good to see you animating again and I'm sure you'll break that rust in no time.
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PostSubject: Re: Dass's thread   Dass's thread EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 9:06 pm

Oh, his avatar just seemed familiar.
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