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Dass
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Posts : 4
Join date : 2014-02-18
Age : 28
 | | Subject: Dass's thread Tue Feb 18, 2014 5:50 pm | |
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The Black Mamba
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Posts : 176
Join date : 2013-11-26
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Tue Feb 18, 2014 6:41 pm | |
| All but the first one are Middle Man, Ima let X comment before I move you. | |
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Xavier
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Join date : 2013-11-24
Age : 28
Location : Washington
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Tue Feb 18, 2014 10:36 pm | |
| i loveit, but the move to middle man may be a tad bit early, i like his style and know he can woah me alot more, but keep it up man. ill be waiting for your update | |
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The Black Mamba
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| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Wed Feb 19, 2014 5:16 pm | |
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Behemoth
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Posts : 25
Join date : 2013-11-26
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Fri Feb 21, 2014 7:15 pm | |
| The first animation I thought was good other than some shakiness however, after his first kick when he takes a small jump, I feel like there should have been an extra frame to not seem so immediate. however, the attacks had good emphasis in them.
For the second animation I couldn't really find any errors either other than the arms when he brought them back to prepare the first kick, in which I saw some shakiness.
The last animation was I believe the best. Good emphasis in the attacks along with reactions and the poses weren't bad either. Overall, I think your close to Middle-man but you just have to tweak some errors. Also welcome to TAL! | |
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Dass
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Join date : 2014-02-18
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:49 pm | |
| thanks for the cc man, ill be sure to update asa i finish this animation | |
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Ussay
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Posts : 14
Join date : 2014-01-31
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:38 am | |
| Indeed you are pretty good, I liked your movements and that effect was well done, but I really enjoyed that last animation, you should make longer animations so it would be easier for you to get moved up (Y) | |
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Kermit the Frog
Dedicated Member
Posts : 65
Join date : 2014-01-31
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Tue Feb 25, 2014 8:43 pm | |
| Love your work man, btw were you Van from DD?
E: Dedicated member :3 | |
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Jojishi
Moderator
Posts : 11
Join date : 2013-11-25
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Thu Feb 27, 2014 8:58 pm | |
| Kermit, he's not Van.
Your animations are pretty good Dass. It's good to see you animating again and I'm sure you'll break that rust in no time. | |
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Kermit the Frog
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Join date : 2014-01-31
| | Subject: Re: Dass's thread Thu Feb 27, 2014 9:06 pm | |
| Oh, his avatar just seemed familiar. | |
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